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Attached to hands,
Pointing at me.

Everywhere I look,
Surrounded but alone,
Circled by fingers.

In a battlefield,
Where the shrapnel flies around me,
Fingers pointing.

Everywhere I look,
Friendly fire is always returned,
With fingers pointing.

Harsh words and accusations,
I take bullet after bullet,
Yet still they're pointing.

How long before they realise,
That every bullet hits me?
And they're always pointing.



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this is nice bunny, if this is how you feel member im here for ya always have been always will be



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Thanks Bryan <3

It's just that my family has a lot of fighting going on...and I feel obligated to stand up for all of them and protect them all but I just can't...and it seems the more I try the more I get accused of things that I didn't even know where happening, or saying things to other members (that I mostly don't even know about either lol).

I told them all I'm done. I will always be loyal to them but I can't be collateral damage anymore. It hurts way too much. <3



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I like this poem. Good job! I feel like a lot of people can relate.



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Thanks! It's definitely one of those things we've all been through before.


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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

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Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

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Romance, Fantasy, and Sad Stories and Poems.

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