So Cold

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Bunny

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08:24pm Sat, Nov 22, 2008
So Cold

Cold so cold
Against your bare skin
Ripples and shivers
Goose bumps
So cold…so cold

It wants to touch
It’s so cold
So let it touch
Shiver against it
So cold…so cold

It wants to feel
It’s not afraid
Let it in to touch
Don’t shirk
So cold…so cold

It wants to dominate
Don’t fight it
Don’t fight it
It’s superior
So cold…so cold

It wants to be inside
Oh let it - let it
It can claim you
It will have you
So cold…so cold

It wants to have you
Touch and feel you
Let it everywhere
Shiver against it
So cold…so cold

It presses against you
Covers you
Smothers you
Close your eyes
So cold…so cold

When you fight
It just tries harder
It has you
You want it
So cold…so cold

Stand tall mountains
Hills where it touches
Ripples where you surface
Tension when you leave
So cold…so cold

It wants to touch you
It wants to surround you
It wants to dominate you
Oh let it- let it
So cold…so cold

It’s not afraid
It touches where it wants
No use running
You can't live without it
So cold…so cold

You can't help but crave it
Drink it in
The world’s greatest invention
Cold water
Let it have you as it desires.


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yeah...uhh anyone noticed I have a thing for water?
God I love water
(praise the lord ;))

 

 

Runic

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you mean praise the cod .... (666)

 

Bunny

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...why?

 

Runic

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cause Cod is amazing

 

Haffina

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I like it..and I like water too =D

 

Bunny

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Better than cod too ;)

 

Haffina

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yeah Cod isnt my favourite fish... :P

 

Plastic

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This is awesome! It sent shivers down my spine! (no pun intended :P)

 

Bunny

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Yaaay!! :D

I was inspired by how water can go anywhere it wants and you have no way to stop it....and by the tension you cause when you push on the top of it...I love water and I love how sensual it can be too.

 

jedimarri

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That is pretty awesome :)

 

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Jade Elizabeth (Bunny) is a Poet who has made 6253 posts since joining Creative Burrow on 12:15am Sun, Nov 2, 2008. Bunny was invited by No one (creator of this site).

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Jade Elizabeth is an eccentric young woman who enjoys writing stories and poems with hidden deeper meanings. She is quoted saying “Writing to me is not a hobby. It's a passion. It's something that lets my thoughts expose themselves, and my heart shine through where other art could not.”

Commonly her poems are inspired by love or depression, and are dedicated to the people who encouraged the emotion. Given the chance she will readily pull her poems apart, exposing the deeper and hidden meanings behind her words.

Her stories are usually unspoken messages to those close to her – giving every story a hidden meaning. Some things are better left unsaid, or in her case, expressed indirectly through stories.

Jade used to write Documentation for Simple Machines in her free time, but has since begun studying and working, which takes up most of her free time now.

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Romance, Fantasy, and Sad Stories and Poems.

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